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Post by Stainstar on Nov 17, 2008 23:56:18 GMT -5
~Chapter 1 Shimmerclaw yowlled in pain as two kits came out; a large dark brown tom and a small gray and white she-cat. Frostystar came running in "Are ouy okay?"she asked. "I'm fine,"Shimmerclaw mewed. "This one will be Sharpkit and the other one will be Ashkit,"The Leafclan Leader mewed. Shimmerclaw nodded and stood up, "I'm going to give Sharpkit to Dragonclan,"She mewed "Thel only have tree warriors." Frostystar nodded and padded to her den. Shimmerclaw picked up Sharpkit ad padded into the ice cold snow.
"Purplestar,"Shimmerclaw wispered. "Yes Shimmerclaw, What's wrong,"Purplestar asked. "I was wondering if your clan would take Sharpkit, You need cats,"Shimmerclaw replyed. "Okay,"Purplestar replyed. Shimmerclaw walked slowly towards the nursrey and put Sharpkit next Dragonclan's only queen;Creamyeyes. AS Shimmerclaw walked out she heard couching and watched as Purplestar keeled to the ground and died.
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Post by Silverleaf on Nov 27, 2008 15:49:31 GMT -5
nice stroy line but its a it blunt
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Post by Stainstar on Nov 27, 2008 17:43:08 GMT -5
I'm a blunt person.
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Post by Silverleaf on Nov 28, 2008 14:16:10 GMT -5
xD i noticed
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